Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
technology is essential to our progress and well-being in the contemporary era. Following the technology is a service that is especially vital to the prosperity of people today. however, i disagree that life today is more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children because today its is time consuming and more expensive.
First, following the technology needs a lot of many. In fact, technology today is a single greatest determinant of the person's success. For instance, using the internet increase our knowledge and enable us to improve ourselves. Thus, people today must follow the technology in the way that help them to compete with others to get a good position. So, they need to spend there money to bye the last updated devices in order to improve themselves in the way that enable them to participate in their community. However, in the past people focus on limited sources to learn from them and used their money to enjoy their life.
Another reason why i advocate that the life in the past was easiest than the life today is that the life today is very expensive today is very expensive. in fact, the people today need to work many hours daily to earn money that meet their families' requirements. So, they lack the time that they need to enjoy themselves. In addition, long working hours increase the stress and makes them less convenience and less comfortable. on the other hand, in the past people had time to spend with their families to get rid from the works's stress.
To sum up, people in the past were more adaptable and less worried than people today. Hopefully, more people will recognize that in order to reduce their tensions and to maintain their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83219178082 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56307876813 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482876712329 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9250606305 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1875 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200547766218 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653436131534 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885311112052 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139518487013 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790163950455 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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