It is clear that highways are great help for people to travel swiftly and reach a destination in time. Nevertheless, they pose serious problems.In this current context, I am going to discuss about the usage and consequences of motor vehicles.
To begin with, one of the biggest threat is, motorways are become terribly dangerous to our pristine environment. They are releasing Chloric flora carbons in the form of smoke, leads to greenhouse effect and global warming. A recent survey conducted on environment pollution says, every year the pollution rate increasing, due to this polar ice caps are started melting and causes the damage of ozone layer. Not only this smoke damaging our pristine environment but also damaging soil and water. Therefore, the government needs to bring draconian laws to avoid this smoke pollution and also needs impose strict rules to dismantle the vehicles which are crossed their longevity.
Another alarming matter is the motorways become more dangerous to people. What I mean by this is, there are no speed limits in most of the countries, which can be the obvious source of fatal accidents. Mostly youngsters, they love to drink and drive, causes to the life threats which we are daily following in our news headlines. And also, bad weather conditions like smoke, fog and smog are the causes of major accidents as the travelers are unable to figure out the other side vehicles.
So, these issue can be tackled by government on imposing stringent laws on speed limits and by constructing speed breakers. And also, this is every rider responsibility to get aware of traffic rules and speed limits by attending the traffic seminars and session conducted by transport ministry.
To sum up, though motor ways become primary and necessary transport system, there are so many pressing problems behind this, one should aware of all these and be cautious. And, with diligent preparation and planning's, our government could address the above major concerns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, i mean, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14814814815 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65182914904 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7658604708 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.2 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108403687962 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357692394909 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282450723243 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574363166723 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410554606177 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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