Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing, skydiving, bungee jumping or not. What are the reasons for that?
Nowadays, playing exciting and dangerous sports has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world, which leads to a moot question “whether the dangerous activities should be supported or not?”. It is a widely held view that doing hazardous sports is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that adventurer sports play a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express several reasons why I support this idea. First and foremost is that it gives you a sense of self-confidence to overcome the challenges and fears or to reduce depression. Secondly, it can be argued that dangerous sports are in the category of lucrative sports so the industries of sports equipment will be able to grow their productions and increase the earning capacity. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that such sports are so exciting that contribute to release adrenalin and the young people will be able to try new occasion.
However, there is no doubt that the risky and dangerous sports provide people with various negative points. It should be taken into account that permanent and serious damages are being happened as a result of adventurous activities. Moreover, it is quite clear that the expenditure of training and purchasing sports equipment is high in price. A very tangible example to illustrate would be the disability of youth that has been occurred by skiing or skydiving.
To recapitulate, I firmly believe that playing perilous or dangerous sports under professional trainers must be taken into consideration. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce stricter legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...xciting and dangerous sports has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19601328904 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99516355731 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0412589681 50.4703680194 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.307692308 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867092720404 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310024223876 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033014852485 0.071462118173 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533313449545 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292202592058 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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