The use of social media, (example Facebook and Twitter), Is replacing face to face contact with many people.
Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?
The last twenty years have witnessed a tremendous growth in the field of information technology. It has revolutionised every aspect of human life such as communication, entertainment etcetera. The Internet has been the most outstanding innovation in the history of mankind and social media is the gift of Internet to people. According to the survey, it is noticed that social media is altered the face to face contact. Social media has some prons and cons which I will portray in the following segments.
To begin with, there is plethora of benefits of using social media. The predominant merit is, nowadays, many tech-savvy ministers are using social media such as Twitter to communicate with the local people. So that they address the problem effectively which are prevailing in the world such as female foeticide, dowry system and so on. For instance, Prime Minister of India, Narender Modi using the Twitter, with the help of it, he can directly take the views of common people to eradicate the problems. Moreover, it can help people to know about the others who are living in the other continents of the world. It gives them the opportunity to interact with them and know about their culture and language. Besides this, it helps to improve the communication skills.
There is a maxin, every coin has two sides so it also has another dark side, which contains some cons of social media. Primarily, people are now more emphasize on making more friends. Nowadays, people have a lot of virtual friends but none has true friend who could stand with them in their thick and thins. Apart from this, people are spent a lot of time on glued to these social websites such as WhatsApp, hike, Snapchat, Facebook etcetera. People inclined towords them more day by day which declined the face to face contacts. Even they do not give time to their families, due to this, a lot of conflicts are occurring in the families, which gave birth to the nuclear families.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own views, I do not deny any of them. I cogitate that social media help people to communicate easily and know about the things which are prevailing all over the world. However, the excessive use of it can cause detrimental effects on the human life. Furthermore, I deem that, there is a need to understand the problem and address it before it gets too late. If person use it judiciously, it becomes a boon for the human life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81534772182 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62619382293 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520383693046 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1465237854 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3043478261 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1304347826 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253673669254 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684940329598 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849640329094 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146044292679 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506934574787 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.