People have always strived to achieve more with their lives, even if that means leaving their home forever. Nowadays more and more people are following the dream of the Promised Land, where they can achieve their goals. This essay will discuss several causes and suggest some solutions to tackle this problem.
First, it is considered by many that this trend is going to affect the quality of the Education, Medicine and many other branches. For instance, teachers, doctors, drivers and other specialists may not be satisfied with their salary or even the way they are treated by society and many of them may try to find all that in another country where this is not the case. Second, if lots of people leave the country to see a better tomorrow, may leave a bad mark to others. For example, many believe that if teachers and doctors start to leave, it might be considered as a bad mark where other experts will follow in their footsteps and depart as well.
First of all, I believe that this can be prevented by the government in a certain way such as implementing certain government policies. This may come in the form of lowered tuition fees, or even no tuition fees for the students that finished high school with a high mark. Second of all, in my opinion, raising the pay might be the best way to stimulate the leading experts to remain in their home country and thrive there. Furthermore, this might make many who are considering leaving to reconsider their choices.
To conclude, I believe that poorer countries may always struggle to retain their specialists, but in my opinion they can try by the means of providing help with the tuition and by providing a competent salary not just for the experts, but for everyone.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6955017301 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43347326349 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498269896194 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.8104563977 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.363636364 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2727272727 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153755206271 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641927144047 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0248141927036 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965694017579 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00843266905017 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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