Space exploration & tourism since the first human being stepped down on the moon has been an undeclared challenge between the two giants of the industrialized world (US & Russia), where both of them developed & cherished Space Programs, space technology companies & most recently, Space tourism Programs.
By the start of the 21st century, Headlines wrote us about the first space tourist who spent 10 million dollars to join the international space station in a touristic trip, which indeed, was an unforgettable life experience. It also with no doubt created lots of job opportunities & elicited a novel type of Services & scientific innovative experiments to cope with this new breakthrough in the field of space tourism. Some people, who think that life on planet earth is batteling distinction, & expect that space & other planets will be our last haven, look to this trip as a sort of preparation, to that forced immigration of life from the earth. they value it as an evitable plan for the future.
On the other hand, Such expensive activities drain funds for limited benefits, as limited number of rich people will look for such expensive entertaining activity. This fund wasting will be at the expense of other vital services that matters almost all nations as Health Care, Education & mankind wellbeing. it is wonderful to look forward & plant to the future, but it is also much more important to concentrate on what benefits & supports people at present.
At last, Exploring new spaces is wonderful as long as its benefits outweigh its drawbacks.
- The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. what problems does it cause? how can we save these problems ? 43
- Pollution and other environmental damage are inevitable results when a country is developing and growing its wealth To what extent you agree or disagree 38
- The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownerships in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. 56
- Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required? 39
- Space tourism: Will it bring positive or negative effects on the world's development? Give your own opinion. Use example based on your experience. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, no doubt, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19920318725 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87767276188 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657370517928 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0567334779 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11963595157 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411292219869 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413115615027 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694363822722 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479712950723 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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