During the last decade a revolutionary invention was introduced to the world that changed every aspect of life, it was the Internet.
Billions around the globe who have access to the Internet became lavish target groups for online merchants and marketers.
It is claimed that the ease & convenience of the online method of shopping will encourage shoppers to over consumption, which is financially an overburden for the shoppers as it is an environmental overburden due to the increased wasting of natural resources.
On the other hand, the disappearance of traditional shopping markets will decrease the resultant pollution caused by crowding & traffic jam, which will indeed positively reinforce the environment.
Meanwhile, traditional house to house based marketing style jobs will be shifted to the Internet & home based marketing style related jobs, which in turn, give both the marketters & the shoppers more of the family quality time.
In conclusion, online shopping social & environmental impacts will reveal it self during the coming decade & will affect the coming generations. So, we have to use it wisely for their sake.
- The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownerships in China. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. 56
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views 78
- Online shopping is increasing dramatically. How could this trend affect our environment and the kinds of jobs required? 39
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- Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erchants and marketers. It is claimed that the ease & convenience of the onli...
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Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eters. It is claimed that the ease & convenience of the online method of shop...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... over consumption, which is financially an overburden for the shoppers as it is an environmen...
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Line 11, column 75, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...ial & environmental impacts will reveal it self during the coming decade & will affect ...
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Line 11, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e coming generations. So, we have to use it wisely for their sake.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53714285714 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98551185484 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.3655880178 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.428571429 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0913711358796 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382484106328 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352038611343 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418910920263 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299587495127 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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