There's nothing wrong to enjoy and have fun in life. Our life sometimes is a fast pace mode with all the things we need to finish and accomplish,sometimes we think we need to go for a while and have fun. I agree that people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment in doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do. Every person has each own lifestyle. Also, for me it depends on the situation. There are advantage and disadvantage on spending too much on personal enjoyment.
In my view, each person has the right to do the things they want but they should take the responsibility and be accountable for there actions especially for the adult. Nowadays, the generation is totally different with the new technology some people are enjoying and sometimes overusing there laptops, computers, and other gadgets. For example, I have a niece who spend too much time on social media that really affect his studies that makes his grade decreases. So, for me some people should know how to limit the usage of computer maybe parents should advice there children to spend only an hour and make sure do there priorities first. On the other hand, it is advantageous in a way that adults will be able to relax and able to take a break from their busy life. Just remember in life we need something to make us relax or else it may affect our psychological mindset.
Another thing is, Spending too much on personal enjoyment is addicting in which adult can't control their emotions because they are doing in a regular basis. Sometimes, they need to realize that it is not right to always with friends, they have to learn to control. For example, I have a friend in college who goes to play bowling every other night that he already did it as habit that is really wrong and he said that's the only thing to make his self unstress and being free. Peers and friends can be a factor. Good and bad influence friends make a person do the things they want to do.
One more reason is adult should learn how to priorities what they want in their life. Making priority will help them not to spend too much time on personal, they will know which one is their priority and do that first then once that priority is done ,that's the time they can do whatever they want. For example, I have a friend who knows how to priority her goals then organize it eventually she was able to finish the goal and she can do whatever she wants and nothing to worry about the time because, she already did what ever she needs to do. Being responsible and empathy makes a better person.
To end my summary, it all depends on the situation if a person is stress out he/she needs to spend time on personal enjoyment at the same time he/she can do the things he/shoe should do. Our lifestyle requires a outlet to reset our mindset and learn to reorganize the priorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
Theres nothing wrong to enjoy and have fun in ...
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Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...to enjoy and have fun in life. Our life sometimes is a fast pace mode with all the things we...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sometimes
... things we need to finish and accomplish,sometimes we think we need to go for a while and ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ending too much on personal enjoyment. In my view, each person has the right to...
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Line 4, column 555, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
... usage of computer maybe parents should advice there children to spend only an hour an...
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Line 6, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chological mindset. Another thing is, Spending too much on personal enjoyment ...
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Line 6, column 88, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...l enjoyment is addicting in which adult cant control their emotions because they are...
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Line 6, column 415, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... habit that is really wrong and he said thats the only thing to make his self unstres...
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Line 8, column 250, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at first then once that priority is done ,thats the time they can do whatever they...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... first then once that priority is done ,thats the time they can do whatever they want...
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Line 10, column 211, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.../shoe should do. Our lifestyle requires a outlet to reset our mindset and learn t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, so, then, while, another thing, for example, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 520.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51153846154 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40647241153 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455769230769 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8779476939 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6086956522 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419301602058 0.236089414692 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12817882073 0.076458572812 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171806511003 0.0737576698707 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271570442119 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0876770199801 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.