What are the reasons for Climate change and what roles government, individuals and Corporates can play to improve it?
Nowadays, the phenomenon of climate change has attracted many controversies and drawn attention from the public. Some people contend that the change in climate is mostly due to the increase in the pollution levels. Perhaps, I also believe that the rise in pollution has a devastating effect on climate. This essay will further elaborate how pollution poses a threat to the climate and how it can be reduced and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various ways how pollution has caused catastrophic effects on the climate. The most conspicuous one is that the increase in the number of the vehicles on roads increases the carbon dioxide emissions, thereby contributing to global warming. Furthermore, there is a noticeable expansion in the global temperature and a rise in sea level due to the melting of ice sheets. Hence, there is no doubt that there are adverse effects of pollution.
However, approaches to deal with the setbacks originated from the climate change are many but the most effective one comes from the individuals and the government. Individuals should restrict the use of air conditioners, aerosol sprays and vehicles that emit carbon dioxide emissions. In addition, the government should make efforts to plant more trees to stabilize the temperature and ecological balance. Furthermore, public transportation should be extensively available at proper frequencies to lower the use of private vehicles.
In the light of above discussion, one can conclude that the impact of climate change is prominent, although individuals and government should take concerted efforts to mitigate its effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, so, thus, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33461538462 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99422274096 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542307692308 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 379.143842365 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4047991186 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127776356111 0.242375264174 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414579770914 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509704745958 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0817325739771 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497907469145 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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