Parents should be held legally responsible for the children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with examples
Nowadays, children are not keeping with their acts which have attracted many controversies and drawn attention from the public. Some people claim that parents are solely responsible for the misbehaviour of children, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that the company of the children matters the most. In my opinion, parents are responsible for the acts of the children. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
To begin with, there are various reasons why parents share the responsibility for children’s acts. The most conspicuous one is that younger ones spend most of their time with the family. Moreover, parents serve the stepping-stones in building the social and mental well-being. A recent survey shows that if a child is persistent and congenial, his parents are always credited for this quality of their child. Thus, it shows that there is a significant impact of parents in the upbringing of the children.
Nevertheless, there is another side, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of the surroundings and instil qualities in the adolescents. The most alarming one is that the company which a child shares with his friends has a major effect on the behavioural aspect of children. For instance, if a child resorts to drugs and thefts, often times it is because of his friends who accompany him in these bad habits. Hence, friends and companions are the sole culprits for the children’s acts.
In the view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the impact of parents on the children is prominent, although his social circle plays a significant role in his behaviour.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14598540146 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9504043309 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529197080292 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6054529227 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263818825331 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107953221207 0.0925447433944 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106988174693 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155826329041 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709764060718 0.0609392437508 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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