Do you agree or disagree with the following statemnt?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do—rather than doing things they should do.
I agree with the statement that people today spend too much time on personal enjoyment- doing things they like to do- rather than doing things they should do. This is the conclusion of the fast pace new world, however we should take control of it rather than give up all responsibilities.
Firstly, everyday we are reading there are more disease than previous year, especially new born children. When we look at the past, our mothers and grandmothers marry at latest around middle of their twenties ages. And they get their children still in their twenties ages. Now all the scientific researches s...
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