The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar graph shows information about the number of Australian male and female who participate physical activity in different age groups in 2010. It is obvious from the diagram that the main gender of regular physical activity is female in every age groups except teenager years.
To begin with male, the most popular of physical activity for men is in teenager age group which is 15 to 24 years old. It is the highest point at 52.8 %. After adolescent years, there is a dramatic drop in participation by 13.3 % to 39.5 % in 35 to 44 age group and this group is the lowest point for men. After this period, the percentage of participant increased gradually from 39.5 % to 43.1 %, 45.1 % and 46.7 % in three age group remaining respectively.
Moving on to female, teenager age group is the only one group which has doing physical activity less than male at 47.7 %. The number of women in activity grew slightly until hit a peak at 53.3 % in 45 to 54 age group. After that, there is a slow decrease by 6.2 % to 47.1 % in 65 and above age group which is the lowest point for female.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5412371134 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45873015111 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6242618141 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366340622225 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15447560673 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109054724162 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262152746808 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998152613404 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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