The line graph below shows the case of diseases caused by x virus in Australia from 1960 to 1995.
The given line graph depicts, the influence in x virus from Australia between 1960-1995.
According to the graph, in 1960 year was started and in 1995 year was dropped virus. On the other hand , in 1960 year was started steadily gone up in 1970 year. Obviously in 1970 year was rapidly increased . From 1975-1980 year were represented remained stable. On the one side, conversely in 1980 gradually fallen down. In 1985 year was sharply reduced x virus in the Australia. Between 1990-1995 year were presented significant remained unchanged. Most of people's were faced virus between 1975-1980 year. And it was exactly 500. Overall, lots of people's were faced this disease between 1975-1980 and year by year by sight lay decreased virus. And x virus was started quantity under 100. And in 1970 year was shown 200 and sharply rised in 1975 year. Virus was plummeted level started over 400.
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- The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. 67
- The graph below shows the una titles of goods transported in the uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 56
- The pie chart below shows tge results of a survey of the causes foor poor learning outcomes in schools in a particularly country in 2011. 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ear was dropped virus. On the other hand , in 1960 year was started steadily gone ...
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ously in 1970 year was rapidly increased . From 1975-1980 year were represented re...
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Line 4, column 451, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the peoples') or simply say ''Most peoples''.
Suggestion: Most of the peoples; Most peoples
...esented significant remained unchanged. Most of peoples were faced virus between 1975-1980 year...
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Line 4, column 603, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'year by'.
Suggestion: year by
...aced this disease between 1975-1980 and year by year by sight lay decreased virus. And x virus ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 149.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96644295302 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43875914355 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 22.4926829268 44% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.755717053 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.8571428571 112.824112599 47% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.6428571429 22.9334400587 46% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178224971486 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812963043776 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110881919462 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280196417622 0.15604864568 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161213697965 0.0819641961636 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.2329268293 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 10.3012195122 36% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.36 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.9970731707 55% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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