The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on land and in sea. What are the reasons and solutions?
Most people agree that the extinction of fauna is a topical issue, as so many countries concern in the problem. The number of endangered species is rising day by day due to human factors. I believe there are several reasons which explain the causing and suggests some solutions to tackle this issue.
One of the main causes that human activities can threaten animal species is that deforestation happens in several areas in the world, giving impact to natural habitat. The forest has been destroyed since a few decades ago in order to make ways for agriculture area, manufacturing, recreation place, and residential houses caused the animals lost their home and place where looking for something to eat. Moreover, they survive on limited space and prone to stress out because of their territory are no longer available to be inhabitable. Another factor is some places are contaminated by undegradable plastics giving a rise to pollution, such as water pollution in seawater. In many cases, birds are died caused by plastics which they eat up before. Similarly, a turtle is found that it hardly breathes due to many straws inside its nose.
Turning to possible solutions, probably the most effective measure is to make a new policy concerning on animals’ habitat. The government should provide strict rules in regard to protect natural inhabitant and establish new reserves to preserve endangered species. Secondly, the communities concerning in wildlife conservation and endangered species invite people to participate in clean up the environment from undegradable waste at least once a month. This kind of event can increase social awareness that there are other organisms living beside us.
To sum up, human activities are causing several of animal species in extinction. Nevertheless, the feasibility of suggested solutions could help solve the problem if government and society cooperate and have the willingness to preserve the ecosystem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, at least, kind of, such as, in many cases, in regard to, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3430420712 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8977216886 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3147329401 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.066666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186101648914 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583056239341 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699112361846 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118853182128 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588649301861 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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