The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs illustrate the population in Japan since 1950. It also estimates trends up to 2055.
It is clear that the proportion of Japan’s population rose gradually until 2005, but will reduce dramatically after 2035. In contrast, the percentage of senior citizens is predicted to rocket in the future.
In the beginning of the period, the general population in Japan was the lowest as well as the percentage of elderly people, at 84,1 million and 4,1 million respectively. The former increased rapidly to 127,8 million in 2005, the highest point over the period. However, the number will decrease sharply to 110 million in 30 years later, then will reach the bottom in 2055, at 89,9 million, which is nearly the same as it was in 1950.
On the other hand, the percentage of older citizens in Japan saw a dramatic jump to 20% in 2005, almost five times higher than that in 1050 (4,9%). By 2055, it is expected that the figure will reach a peak at 36,5 million. In the future, more than a third of the population is the people aged over 65 in Japan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, third, well, in contrast, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68449197861 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52950786129 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3406134373 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0786498113711 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359943559981 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348154805441 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558481658992 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196575028875 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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