In the past , Male and female rank different ,wherein female under male level and female has limited latitude . in the universities most of male than female in every subjects but after appearing gender equality , female latitude wider even almost equivalent .Give your views.
It is irrefutable to say that from the past to today’s life, gender equality still exists in various aspects of life.It is claimed by the section of the people that in the past, males have higher educational degrees as compared to females and now it is reversed and females have explored their selves more than men.I strongly agree with this and I will delve deeply about such type of issue in this essay.
Firstly, in the past, owing to narrow mind thinking or religious matters, it was not allowed to women to get education, right to vote and even they could not show their faces to male community.Therefore, very limited women could get education at basic level and going to universities was like swim across the sea for them, resulted, they get married and handle only the household activities.
Secondly, due to globalization and gender equality, nowadays entries of the women in the higher education institutions is mushrooming.In the past, because of the separate institutions, courses was very limited for the females like home science, nursing, stitching etcetera .However, these days a girl can choose any kind of subject for education, she can do engineering, get education of space, marines and many more. Moreover, equilibrium has raised the job opportunities in each profession for the both gender, resulted ranking of girls are increasing in the universities.
To conclude, receiving of males and females in equal in the universities can grow up the level of research and the productivity. Moreover females can think free and explore more.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 937.175257732 140% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12890625 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96284105615 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 16.3608247423 257% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.452321064 44.8134815571 338% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.833333333 76.5299724578 286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.6666666667 16.8248392259 254% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 4.34317383033 315% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262507936632 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139213089304 0.0766984524023 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841331903189 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166191320013 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879898898196 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 8.37731958763 288% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 70.7449484536 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 7.45979381443 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 7.59969072165 131% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 8.62886597938 319% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 8.54432989691 220% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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