An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• offer to find somewhere to stay
• give advice about what to do
• give information about what clothes to bring
Dear John,
Hope you and your family doing well. First of all, thank you for writing a letter to me asking information about Goa, India. I am really excited that you chose Goa for your two weeks vacation. As you aware that I am living with two other roommates in my apartment, therefore, accommodation in my apartment would not be feasible. However, there are so many hotels, which are not costly, near to Samoa beach and it is just 2 miles from my apartment.
There are so many places to visit in Goa. One of them is Samoa beach which is very beautiful clear water ocean and there are plenty of water activities available. Furthermore, there is an amusement park, Essel World, which has activities for all the age groups.
Right now the weather in Goa is very pleasant and I am sure you would like it. You could bring summer clothes and water activities clothes. However, sometimes it will rain here so it will not be bad idea to carry a raincoat with you. Call me if you need more information about Goa and do not forget to meet me while you are here.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Best regards,
Peter
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51219512195 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37363066759 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629268292683 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2789692737 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0714285714 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104705782139 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390916152574 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574192185971 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053043343552 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627976041249 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.