Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your point of view.
Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.
The experience of parenthood is unbelievable, however, it is difficult to decide which member of the family contribute more or less, although, both people father and mother play their role to raise their children and they work tirelessly to establish him/her a valuable/great part of the society. As far as my views are concern I will go with feminist side because one who create something and carry 9 months heavy bowl in her abdomen will surely care more than men.
The joy of becoming parent is amazing. The contribution of women as well as men cannot be ignored, however, the input of women is somehow more than the men because of various reasons, men are busy I their working life, also, they consume major portion of day light outside, whereas women do spend complete time with her child. The more time you spent with your child the more emotional establish between both of you simultaneously as of obvious.
On the other hand, the contribution of men cannot overlooked, likewise women, men struggle too much to provide his family better financial needs, he seems look busy however, intention of the father always stand with his family, therefore, the importance of father and mother cannot be calculated, rather judging which side of the balance is higher I think it is better to say balance contribution of the both is the only way to raise children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... do spend complete time with her child. The more time you spent with your child the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, look, so, therefore, well, whereas, i think, as well as, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87553648069 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64962982897 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.89270944 49.4020404114 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.333333333 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.8333333333 20.7667163134 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 7.06120827912 288% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195472372704 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857877332587 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562623625266 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129207855698 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270636564479 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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