Some people prefer to spend their live doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Change is make better than before or past. People many activities do everyday and many happen do. It of course make some people need changes for what activities give boring. Surely, people have changing feel about what things happen in live and make plans or preparation to things do change. People who make change, it can be make good or often bad effects. For overall, change is always a good think.
In personally, I have both agreement about people prefer change in their lives. Firstly about good effects. People can get new feelings for things what was changing. Feelings look like happy and exciting. It is cause of people success to make changing in their lives. Secondly, people can have powerful, new spirit and make brain feel refresh. It is because if people do change about place, for example, people can feel than new place give a different feel, give different people who live around that new place and give feel adrenalin to rise steadily to do something different in new place.
The second agreement is unbenefit who people do change. In my opinion, who people need to do change it mean that people have unstability feeling. People always search something new and it make people do not concern for an activity. For example, who people work in A company not too long work get feel bored and loss spirit to give best actions on work. People always search another company and it make that people did not have good work experients.
So, basicly people would have plan to do change for things in their lives and avoiding change. People do change if have more time to do things and feel that enough. For example, someone who work in company after 3 or 4 years will be resign and search other companies for high position.
In conclusion, people must think brave before do change in their lives.
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Comments
Ren, I've read this essay.
Ren, I've read this essay. Testbig suggests you working for your essay there. Pay particular attention to those points.
To me, there are several points dealing with the grammar that you should consider to work with.
Here from the 1st paragraph:
- Change is make
- many happen do
- It of course make
- People who make change
- change is always a good think.
Reno, you should pay
Reno, you should pay attention about using verb : make, change and do. Try to find synonyms. Try to enlarge your vocabularies.
Your opinion, should write better in the 4th paragraph than in 2nd paragraph.
Your conclusion is too short, make it longer.
Sentence: Change is make better than before or past.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and make
Description: The fragment than before or is rare
Sentence: It of course make some people need changes for what activities give boring.
Description: The fragment course make some is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: For overall, change is always a good think.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to good and think
Sentence: It is because if people do change about place, for example, people can feel than new place give a different feel, give different people who live around that new place and give feel adrenalin to rise steadily to do something different in new place.
Description: The fragment place give a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, past tense
Sentence: The second agreement is unbenefit who people do change.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to who and people
Sentence: In my opinion, who people need to do change it mean that people have unstability feeling.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to who and people
Sentence: People always search something new and it make people do not concern for an activity.
Description: The fragment it make people is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
Sentence: For example, who people work in A company not too long work get feel bored and loss spirit to give best actions on work.
Description: A WH-pronoun, nominative is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to who and people
Sentence: People always search another company and it make that people did not have good work experients.
Description: The fragment it make that is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
Sentence: People do change if have more time to do things and feel that enough.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to if and have
Sentence: People always search another company and it make that people did not have good work experients.
Error: experients Suggestion: experiments
Sentence: So, basicly people would have plan to do change for things in their lives and avoiding change.
Error: basicly Suggestion: basically
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Different Words: 135 200
Read a good grammar book.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 317 350
No. of Characters: 1448 1500
No. of Different Words: 135 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.22 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.568 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.116 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 111 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 51 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 30 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.409 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.066 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.397 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.548 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.143 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5