As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
I completely disagree with the stated assertion. In contemplation to my experiences, I think the greater the dependency of humans on technology, higher is the accuracy in their decisions and choices. Relying on technologies would help people make informed decisions and in fact, their thought pattern would improve manifold in the process of questioning themselves, why a machine has answered/replied in such a way. This is very evident from the gradating successes of Hanson Robotics, Elon Musk and Malala Yousafzai in the fields of computers, science and arts who have achieved so much and stood as epitomes of success by relying on technology.
Consider Hanson Robotics, a Saudi Arabian company, which created "Sophia", the world's first human robot. They have used latest trends in technology such as Artificial Intelligence and Machine Learning to create a robot which stands at the acme, in the history of robotics. This would help build a better world by helping humans in various fields such as military and defense. By this, we can evidently see that by depending on technology, we improve our thinking and have a wider reach in all aspects, in turn helps us achieve and learn a lot more.
Also, Evaluating the scenario of Elon Musk (CEO of Tesla and SpaceX), with his vision has envisaged and implemented the first of a kind, a satellite with a Tesla car inside it, which would orbit around the earth. This satellite was successfully launched earlier this year and is now in the earth's orbit. Inventions of these kind, are not possible by mere knowledge but also by using and being aided by technology. Henceforth we can say our ability and vision increases and falls in place by using technology.
Consequently, Malala Yousafzai, a 17 year old who was shot by Taliban, survived and in turn took aid of social media to be a voice for many many women, and has spoken about child rights, importance of education and feminism. Her thoughts and aspirations have reached millions through technology and left the whole world sink in an undulating wave of thoughts about changing the world, and looking at life in a different perspective. Only because of advancements in technology, it is possible to witness the words spoken by such leaders and help us inculcate different values and ethics in our lives. In situations like this, by relying on technology, the ability of humans to think will definitely proliferate.
I would hence want to take a stance by saying that dependence on technology would not deteriorate our thinking capacity as long as we are being productive with our thoughts. As aptly said, "There is always more to know".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, so, i think, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04751131222 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95171536829 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556561085973 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4871065809 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.944444444 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142933982919 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442294263934 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528460585347 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768095267379 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319337915379 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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