some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.How true is this statement?

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some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
How true is this statement?

Tourism industry is really essential for some country because the economic of the country relay on it. People have different opinion about tourism, some people believe that it has detrimental effects on the society and environment. The other may believe that it has some benefit of the society. In my view, tourism industry can boost the country’s economy.

First , Tourism helps people to know about different culture and language and also generation gap. When tourist visits a country they consider to everything that are new to them and sometimes it has some special mental effect.

Next, tourism is the best way for boosting the economy of the country, It provides more job opportunities and also makes the authorities vigilant about the flourishing the city.

In conclusion, I believe that despite some negative effects that tourism can have. It has more impressive benefit of the country.

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2019-04-13 Alisher Bobonazarov 67 view
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, really, so, in conclusion, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 1615.20841683 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 145.0 315.596192385 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27586206897 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70714358392 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4036392308 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1111111111 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285414318861 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1150787951 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829037362914 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160556661487 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899760147625 0.056905535591 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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