It is claimed by some that tourists can be factor of a lot of problems in the countries they travel. Also it is required urgent solution for the problems like that.
From my point of veiw, it is totally true statement. This essay will discuss drawbacks of travellers and give opinions to decrease negative effects on the country holiday-makers travel to.
Some people believe that travellers to other countries have many negative effects on that place, local culture and inhabitants.
To start with, tourists left a lot of rubbish in natural, sightseeing places during their travel. What is the more, behaviour, clothers of foreigners have bad affects on mentality of local people.
Furthermore, visitors make transports move a lot while they are travelling and as a consequense, this transports produce harmful gases to atmosphere and it is one of the main reasons of global warming. For example, pyramidas in Egypht are being gone to ruin by gases which is steamed from tourists.
Finding new ways of reducing problems which is come into existence by travellers is very essential.
First of all, government should produce new perfect rules for travellers to regulate their acts.
In addition to this, it should be diminished number of inhabitants in the place travellers go by the controllers who are recruited by local government.
Furthermore, consultation should suggested tourists such as, many ways decseasing amount of gases rising to the atmosphere and harmful effects on nature, of watching sightseeing places such as, walking on foot, going to the places by bicycle and it also helps holiday-makers to see monumental buildings, culture of local people, nature more closely. For instance, it is recommended by scientists to see attractive places on foot, by walking to get more information about this area.
To conclude, visiting to another country has negative affects such as, polutting areas, effecting on traditions of local people. However, it would be benefitial to the society, if it is found new methods of solving these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27878787879 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91656237515 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548484848485 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5722117328 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247425861864 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783605070029 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964221604641 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106456623926 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110708635466 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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