In today’s societies, the question of how do movies and television affected people’s behavior has become a controversial topic among people in many circles and camps. Different people have various types of responses to this topic based on their social, cultural, or even familial backgrounds. However, as far as I’m concerned, I believe that these media can have a positive influence on people’s behaviors for some reasons that I elaborate them in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the first thing immediately comes to mind is that people usually watch a movie or televisions whether with their friends or with their family members. In fact, TV programs provide an opportunity for people to associate with each other. Accordingly, people can experience a lot of appealing moments. This fun time is very necessary especially in this world that most of the human is almost busy. Therefore, people can diminish their social tension and feel happier. Let’s make a brief explanation about that. I remember that when I was in the university, I had a weekly plan with my friends in which we gathered in one places and saw one movie altogether. I haven’t forgotten those plans because they helped us to get away from the tension of university courses and have a plenty of pleasure time.
Another noteworthy thing that should be mentioned is that movies and television serials give a lot of interesting subject to someone to interact with other people. In other words, when a program is broadcasted on television, a plenty of people will see it. So, people can easily use this program for starting the communication with another person. Therefore, people will have more relation to each other, so will inform about their problems. let me shed a light on my point. According to the last researches that were published in a well-known journal, scientists recognized that subjects which were introduced in the television program consist the topic of around 60 percent of people’s conversation in the public places such as bus stop, taxi station, etc.
In conclusion, there are numerous reasons to show that TV program and movies positively impact on people’s life. These programs not only help family members to have a fun time and become more cohesive but also provides a lot of subjects to interact with other people. Consequently, it is essential that any person understand the importance of television.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...r, so will inform about their problems. let me shed a light on my point. According ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18136020151 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95283087856 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576826196474 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9586059184 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.85 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.85 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246366977016 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699569870057 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810579971661 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161440954639 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094525695017 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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