It has been often said that truth and honesty are one of the best human qualities.Telling the truth, It is argued, especially in the relationship of truth for everyone is always the best choice and it is represents the characteristics of good behavior and loyal people, has improved the quality of life for human. In contrast, sometimes conditions require the people to hide the truth. I am consummate accord with the fact that truth is the best factor for humans. So, in this essay I will express pros and cons of truthfulness and present a general conclusion of both views.
On the one hand, it is intuitively obvious that there is no trait better than the truth for humans and honest people have the best moral qualities. They are approved and trustworthy for everyone. The important features of these people include loyalty, good behavior and selflessness. They have very good and lasting communication with their friends and members of family can easily trust them since honesty is the most important aspect of any relationship. It is clear that an ideal and the most significant factors for choosing a friend is honesty and truthfulness. More precisely like the head of a manufacturing plant when this person honestly treats his employee resulting in a great relationship will be created between the employer and the personnel. Also, they can conveniently trust him and they do their jobs more carefully. Indeed, truthfulness and honesty are the best property to maintain a relationship.
In spite of arguments mentioned above, certain disadvantages are definitely associated with this concept and are worth mentioning. Occasionally, doctors refuse to say somethings to their patients for giving moral. Unfortunately, some parents to punish their children, tell them lie that this way will lead to the child’s false upbringing. Consequence could be devastating for the community since this behavior dramatically affects social crime and increased them. telling the truth
To recapitulate, it is well noted that eventhough truth and honesty are the best traits of mankind and obey it as an unwritten rule, some people break it down. So, we need to embrace the idea that we must fundamentally focus on this issue and every person should strengthen this culture in itself.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: ali.darudi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ve enough motivation for their work. 158 In spite of arguments mentioned above, b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47858942065 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14252711273 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518891687657 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.7028870232 48.9658058833 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4666666667 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0242756738464 0.236089414692 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00989131066434 0.076458572812 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214568715403 0.0737576698707 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0171584428884 0.150856017488 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104846166802 0.0645574589148 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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