You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter.
1. Introduce yourself
2. Describe your plans for the party
3. invite your neighbour to come
Hello Tina,
Hope you are doing great. Happy to introduce myself to you. I'm Priyankaa residing in your opposite flat. Me and my family have moved to this place since last week. I came to your home to meet you, but unfortunately I was not able to see you.
Our family is foreseeing to have a party this weekend at my place. I would like to invite you and grace the event. My friends will be joining the event and we are planning to have a rock dance event, due to which we will be procuring a new amplifier.
I hope this may cause some noise and disturb you. It was our long day plan to have a rock dance, I apologize in advance if it may hinder you.
I hope you will also enjoy the party. Expecting your arrival at 9 AM. We can have rock dance event followed by lunch.
Please consider my invite in person and join us.
Thanks,
Priyankaa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...reat. Happy to introduce myself to you. Im Priyankaa residing in your opposite fla...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23926380368 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18644316292 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8339520889 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 49.3571428571 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6428571429 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274020891934 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896593737282 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661003256721 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143219437316 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862440851827 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.13 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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