Before us, there is a bar chart that illustrates the percentage of British citizens that make donations to charity, according to five different age groups, during the years of 1990 and 2010.
Overall, the majority of the population who share their money in 1990 are of middle age, while twenty years later (2010), are of slightly older age. In contrast, the ones that give the least are the younger group in the study.
Moreover, from 18 until 25 years of age, a sharp decrease occurred during the studied period, from more than 15% to slightly more than 5%. Similar decrease, but less pronounced (approximately 5%), is verified in the to following age groups, from about 30 and 40% respectively, in 1990.
In the other hand, the charity donation group with more than 50 until 65 years increased from 35 until almost 40%. Finally, the seniors with more than 65 also start to participate more in recent years, but only a minor rise is observed.
To sum up, during the 90' more younger people were involved in charity, while more recently, in 2010, older citizens increased their participation but overall, the majority still occurs between the middle age groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th more than 50 until 65 years increased from 35 until almost 40%. Finally, the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, still, while, in contrast, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90404040404 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49120993211 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580808080808 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3910571785 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160128708306 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753335925922 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602727726278 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101103248158 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686003037918 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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