Before us, it is represented a schematic that describes the electricity production by a Geothermal power plant.
Overall, it is divided in five steps, starting above the ground level, proceeding to the underground for the 2 following stages and finalising at the surface once again.
Firstly, the cold water goes more than 4 kilometres deep, reaching the injection well. At this point, being in contact with hot rocks the water heats up to a boiling point transforming itself into vapour and therefore ascending to the surface, in the producing well, leading to its condensation as steam afterwards.
While the pressure increases with the steam, in the fourth point, the final step is reached by powering the generator turbine and producing the desired electricity.
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- The diagram below shows how geothemal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters ( such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is imp 84
- Some people think that teenagers who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adult criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d finalising at the surface once again. Firstly, the cold water goes more than 4...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 652.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30081300813 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89928320156 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723577235772 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4877762685 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.4 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0355135808395 0.215688989381 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0167224073673 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239941910107 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0198530753422 0.15604864568 13% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251631050982 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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