The only thing that interfere with my leaning is my education- Einstein. What does he mean by that? And do you think he is correct?
Humans are free spirited animals. We feel happy and comfortable in our natural environment. Einstein was a great physicist, he uncovered various theories of the universe. By this statement Albert Einstein infer that education holds individuals back from opening their mind to the undiscovered secrets of the world, and that humans are natural beings and learn to well when they are in their natural habitat- up and personal with the nature. This essay will discuss, humans have potential to learn and grow in their natural environment and education can too, provide in-depth knowledge.
Firstly, Humans have capacity to go beyond naturally- defined goals. As primates, our ancestors have evolved by making natural selections. For example, inventing fire to cook and stay warm, agriculture and cattle bearding to eat and survive starvation. All these discoveries were made by human in their natural habitat, where they had ample of opportunities to keep exploring, creat and discover new things, unlike education were you are forced to limit your knowledge, which is restricted to books and to examination hall. Thus, we can say education limits us from discovering our natural talent.
Secondly, education has contributed greatly to the modern world. Without education, our environment would have been unsustainable. For example, the cure for diseases, facts about quantum physics, artificial intelligence- gained momentum after advancement in education. Education has played a vital part in irradiating social and political issues in the world, which are created by humans. Education has also, given people a new prospect towards living a civilised life, through which, people can change there circumstances. Therefor, we can say education does not hinder our capabilities.
To conclude, this essay discussed, Einstein view on education blocking humans from discovering their natural talents, and why education is an important tool. In my opinion, education is burdensome, and I agree with Albert Einstein.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57003257329 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91153833213 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631921824104 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.8021022967 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128201607404 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430891454887 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058293298025 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892129520421 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549109681241 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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