By and large, teaching is the most difficult task in every society. Teachers have a vital function in every society in order to prepare students for their future life. In this regard, there is controversy among people regarding this fact that teachers were more appreciated by the society in the past than they are today. A popular belief in this regard is that teachers are more valued today and people will appreciate them more than the past, whereas the other group of people take a complete opposite view. Personally, I agree with the former. In the following reasons, I will attempt to support this idea through 2 reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that people are now more literate than the past. The more literate people in a society, the more appreciation for teachers. In 100 years ago, the life conditions were quite different from now. Being literate was not an option and parents had not concern about their children's education. Children usually followed their ancestor's occupation. However, today, parents are more concerned about their children's education. They work hard in order to make enough money to register their children in a good school in order to provide a good situation for them to succeed. Hence, being literate is now more important than the past and literacy is more valuable for people. In this regard, teachers, who play a vital role in order to teach students, are now more appreciated and valued by the society than they were in the past.
The second reason which deserves some words here is that teachers play a vital role in preparing students for their future life. Children will go to school in order to learn whatever is needed for the future. Students are very significant for every society owing to the fact that they are the next generation of doctors and engineers. They are the ones who guarantee the prosperity of every country, so it is very important that they will be taught appropriately. In this regard, teachers play a vital role in preparation students. They must teach them whatever is needed for the future. Hence, it is very important for them to have enough knowledge about a wide variety of subjects. They must provide enough information regarding everything in order to teach students and answer their questions. Thus, since teachers are now more literate than the past and they have to prepare students for their future life, they are more appreciated today by the society than the past.
To put it everything in a nutshell, teachers are now more valued and appreciated than the past owing to the fact that people are now more literate and being literate is very important for them. Besides, teachers play a vital role in every society in order to prepare students for their future life. They must teach them whatever is needed, so it is necessary for them to be expert in a wide range of knowledge and as a result, they are now more appreciated than the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'concerned'.
Suggestion: concerned
...e was not an option and parents had not concern about their childrens education. Childr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, however, if, regarding, second, so, thus, whereas, as a result, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 15.1003584229 245% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2439.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82015810277 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4885629434 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.367588932806 0.524837075471 70% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7683972399 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7407407407 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229692189471 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771164701451 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630956887579 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174483500312 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347401240874 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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