What is important invention, computers, antibiotic or airplane and why.
Each invention has its own significance and it affected humans life by fulfilling their needs. While some people believe that the computer is a mother of all invention, others maintained that each new invention acts as individual and has their unique image in World. This essay will discuss why each invention is important regardless of its outcome.
At the same point near in the future, computers are being used in every field to find out the possibilities of new products. It has a drastic impact on various industries i.e. medicine, aviation or transport.To exemplify, new products are designed each day depend upon models and materials. In medicine industry, computers are used to identify new finding and help researchers to ease their work.
As result of this, computers are the backbone of any invention.
Despite the major role of the computer, some people do not agree that computer play vital role in any invention.If we look at ancient history, when the computer does not exists. People invented important products without the computer. For example, Edison invented the electric bulb without the computer.It was one of the greatest inventions in history. There is others invention like the steam engine, the telephone, the airplane and so on.
Every invention plays the profound role in their period of time and has its unique uses.While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that the computer is the best invention so far and benefits of a realm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...as its own significance and it affected humans life by fulfilling their needs. While s...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... invention, others maintained that each new invention acts as individual and has their unique...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
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Line 6, column 171, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'exist'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: exist
...ent history, when the computer does not exists. People invented important products wit...
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Line 6, column 171, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'exist'
Suggestion: exist
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Message: Did you mean 'There are others'?
Suggestion: There are others
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Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07287449393 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69947904906 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599190283401 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1139793881 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.416666667 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.25397266985 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0663207944121 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318681885137 0.0925447433944 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342308904124 0.071462118173 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0424500366333 0.151781067708 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358989529931 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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