Some people believe law changes human behaviour. To what extent you agree and disagree?
Law is an essential part of any society for making the peaceful environment and to keep activities under control. While some believe that law changes human behavior depend upon various circumstances, other maintained that human behavior is not under the control of any law. This essay will discuss that law is meant for human right and it also makes the profound impact on human behavior.
At the same point in the future, it is obligatory for all of us to abide roles imposed by law. Law is not only responsible to control society's activity but also maintain peace around us. Some people behave differently to adopt new roles. To exemplify, people with the bad reputation will try to change themselves in order to refrain from any strict action. As a result of this, people behave according to the environment and adapt the new roles.
Despite the great outcome of law, some people do not agree that law is responsible for human behavior. Law is meant to save humanity but if people get afraid of it than it has a negative impact on society. Moreover, it would lead society to against the democracy. For instance, people have to take forceful actions to abide the law, however, it required them to change the behavior. This is absolutely the unnecessary actions.
Law is imposed in order to maintain peace around society not to disturb it. While there are strong arguments on both side of cases, my opinion is that law is the combination of morals roles and code of conduct, which should be imposed in a correct way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 236, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ode of conduct, which should be imposed in a correct way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 265.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77735849057 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53412452592 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543396226415 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3666509582 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.25397266985 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279757305743 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954905109296 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845894927561 0.071462118173 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169775699812 0.151781067708 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810199056502 0.0609392437508 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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