In ancient era people use to tame domestic animals like dog, donkey, camel etc. to help them carry goods and guard their houses. but the recent scenario focuses more on taming wild animals, which have lead to many serious consequences. There are always controversies regarding the use or misuse of animals for human benefits. I will discuss both the points in details and then, i will conclude my stand.
Use of animals for human purposes are vastly divided in to many groups, that are for taming, entertainment, clinical research use, etc. Animals used in research program proves of a great advantage, that helps in bringing new drugs or medicine to cure different diseases. But this leads to non-ethical use of this poor animals too, which should not be allowed. There should be a governing body guiding all this ethical rules strictly, so that exploitation of animals can be stopped.
Also, man uses animals for their skin, meat and many other animal products. Using animals skin for making leather should be strictly prohibited. Now a days there is this trend of taming wild cats for business purpose, which is the most concerning part. They tame them by drug over dosing, so that people can play and take photos with them. Such activities should be banned immediately and crucial legal actions should be taken against those activists. The other animal that is highly exploited is Elephant. They are trained harshly to carry people for jungle safaris.
Many countries have banned such violent and non ethical activities to save animals from being exploited, but still there are people continuing such activities to earn money. This should be prohibited and stopped where we humans are harming them.
Lastly i would conclude that use of animals for human benefits should not be promoted randomly, some ethical doby needs to govern the rules, for betterment of animals life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, regarding, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07371794872 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44621423553 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.370692283 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3157894737 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57894736842 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239977320551 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836004556949 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463318895724 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145132849776 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462879025314 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.