Modern era has changed person's life in every fields. Government is spending money every area where is needed.it is debatable topic where government should give more attention in construction of cinemas and sports stadiums or science area and education growth. Let's discuss both points.
Theatres and sports building are based on government but some are also on private funding. In addition these recreational area also essential in today's hectic lifestyle. Without having these entertaining facilities,life become bore and dull.cinemas participate economic growth of country and other side spor...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...s or science area and education growth. Lets discuss both points. Theatres and s...
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Suggestion: addition,
...ut some are also on private funding. In addition these recreational area also essential ...
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Suggestion: , life
...out having these entertaining facilities,life become bore and dull.cinemas participat...
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Suggestion:
...y and fit as well as they can make their profession.they can play for country. An...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...cation.because without these facilities economical structure of country may effect.recrea...
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...cilities economical structure of country may effect.recreational building has own...
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...es economical structure of country may effect.recreational building has own value. Bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63940520446 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9604151714 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6732454668 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2380952381 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8095238095 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28237478021 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667077972358 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621681268848 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139176382657 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485086647695 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.54 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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