Crime is major issue in today's era. Rich countries influenced up-to great extent. Mostly city area where high standards people are living. Newspapers publisher are making money by giving crime news in front page. Every news channel telecast many news about crime. Let's discuss why it's happening and what would be controlled it.
Higher rate of crime is in urban area. First reason of this is rich socities,neculer families.theives main target are old people and children. For instance they could easily stole anything from elder people like purse, jewellery and other valuable things. In addition they try to target minors to kidnap. After that they demand big amount of money. Their parents can easily fulfill it.
But on other side villages crime rate is lower. Main reason people are middle and lower class.however they are illiterate but have joint families. So they have less fear of crime. they don't have enough money and expensive things which they need to worry about.owing to Lower status,they enjoy free life without any fear.
Although crime is increasing rapidly in cities of many countries. There should be taken some steps to decrease it.In cities sides should be CCTV cameras in residential area and all main street. Security guards for day and night duties. Rich people also should hire their personal security guards.children should not allow to pick and drop by unknown persons. Government and police should cooperate to public to find criminal and give hard punishments and fines.
At the conclusion,crime is bigger problem.if we will not try to stop this so it will be spread in whole world. Criminals will be free if no action will taken by us. Crime is a evil.evryone cooperation is needed to clear and stop it. Crime free country can grow well economically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...front page. Every news channel telecast many news about crime. Lets discuss why its ...
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Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...front page. Every news channel telecast many news about crime. Lets discuss why its happe...
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Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...channel telecast many news about crime. Lets discuss why its happening and what woul...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... controlled it. Higher rate of crime is in urban area. First reason of this i...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , neculer
...a. First reason of this is rich socities,neculer families.theives main target are old pe...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'steal'
Suggestion: steal
...hildren. For instance they could easily stole anything from elder people like purse, ...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...jewellery and other valuable things. In addition they try to target minors to kidnap. Af...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...on they try to target minors to kidnap. After that they demand big amount of money. T...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'villages'' or 'village's'?
Suggestion: villages'; village's
...asily fulfill it. But on other side villages crime rate is lower. Main reason people...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...ilies. So they have less fear of crime. they dont have enough money and expensive th...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... So they have less fear of crime. they dont have enough money and expensive things ...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...eed to worry about.owing to Lower status,they enjoy free life without any fear. A...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y enjoy free life without any fear. Although crime is increasing rapidly in cities o...
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Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n cities of many countries. There should be taken some steps to decrease it.In ci...
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Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...uld be taken some steps to decrease it.In cities sides should be CCTV cameras in ...
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Line 7, column 324, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'picking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: picking
...curity guards.children should not allow to pick and drop by unknown persons. Government...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , crime
...shments and fines. At the conclusion,crime is bigger problem.if we will not try to...
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Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'take' or 'be taken'?
Suggestion: take; be taken
...riminals will be free if no action will taken by us. Crime is a evil.evryone cooperat...
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Line 9, column 175, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...if no action will taken by us. Crime is a evil.evryone cooperation is needed to c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09152542373 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6340880764 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647457627119 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7263563508 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.08 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.64 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20415708294 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669056243221 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100798677194 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104373111469 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344492959483 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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