In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why do you think it is the case? How should children or teenagers be punished?
It is true that more and more crimes are committed by potential criminals, children and teenagers in particular, in some countries. I believe that there are a variety of reasons of this phenomenon and the children or teenager who are involved in crimes should be punished in different ways.
There are two main factors. Firstly, the shortage of education is one main factor. In many countries around the world which are in poverty due to no infrastructure for education and rare teachers who are trained professionally, most of your children and teenagers are poorly educated and they are not aware of the line between legal and illegal. Secondly, the lack of parental supervision is another factor. This is because extremely high cost of living forces both parents to work full-time and they have no time to supervise their children who spend most of time watching violent information on TV or internet, which consequently contributes to crime such as theft, robbery or even murder.
The punishments for criminals should be considered depending on different crime. Those who committed minor crime should be punished by doing community services. By cleaning streets, removing graffiti and tending gardens, they can learn how to act as meaningful members of society and realize that they can make contributions to society. In addition, children and young people who committed serious offenses should be sent to prison. By confining them in the extremely small area and taking away their freedom to meet families, they can repent and take stock of their life.
In conclusion, I believe that lack of education at school and supervision from parents is the main factors that lead to crime and by doing community work and imprisonment, children and teenagers would be aware of the consequences of their bad behaviors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15540540541 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84396860288 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.0718141727 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280722169576 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101831155074 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931628911376 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186447027511 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904125212037 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.