life is unpredictable and human beings have inclination to commit blunder very often in the amidst of flattery, allurements of worldly pleasure. Indeed consequences of bad decision can make one feel guilty and not left. with any other options. Awful decision can result in depression and jeopardizing life. To begin with it is prudent to predict positive and negative outcomes of any decision. Compelling example of this situation is my friend's tragic story. One of my friend was very much obsessed with wrestling. In spite of denial from all other family members, she desperately wanted to be a famous wrestler. However, all
of a sudden she was critically injured during fight. As a result of that she suffered from quadriplegia and lost all her abilities to perform activities of daily living. Unfortunately, she repented extremely for her decision and became victim
Of severe depression.If she would have choose decent career of engineer or business woman she would have prevented such devastating consequences. However, pitiful condition can be avoided by wisely estimating merits and demerits prior to coming to conclusion . Second, sexually transmitted diseases and other air born infections are spreading malignantly everywhere. It is imperative to follow safety precautions to avoid contamination especially for the health care workers and people living below line. Moreover, increasing number of people suffering from diseases such as Acquired Immune deficiency syndrome is culprit in passing diseases to progeny. Apparently, it can hamper health of many generations in family as it is multi system affecting nervous system, organs and blood diseases and gradually bones and muscles loose their ability to function. Many people every year are losing their life due to terminal stage of AIDS. Even though, progression can be somewhat prevented with the use of modernized medications, but still in many cases dead is inevitable after few years. Thus, it is foolishness not to follow antiseptic precautions in health care field, better to prevent than cure. Hence, widespread education must be offered to the illiterate people to save many offsprings from deadly diseases.
In a nutshell, after analyzing the prompt it is worth saying that one should forecast future results before taking any decision and to use sanitary methods in critical situations in order to be safe.
- Some people think that the main purpose of schools is to teach children to become good citizens and workers, rather than benefiting them as individuals. Agree/ Disagree? 81
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- TPO-30 - Integrated Writing Task A little over 2,200 years ago, the Roman navy attacked the Greek port city of Syracuse. According to some ancient historians, the Greeks defended themselves with an ingenious weapon called a "burning mirror": a polished co 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Life
life is unpredictable and human beings have ...
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Suggestion: Indeed,
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Suggestion: If
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... and to use sanitary methods in critical situations in order to be safe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, thus, such as, as a result, in many cases, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39678284182 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89950671329 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630026809651 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4207242422 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112530248455 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317489755276 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371271339682 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571778183464 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339036646355 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.01818996416 126% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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