Some people think it is better to travel alone and other think it is better with tour guide. Which one you prefer? Provide details and examples to support your response.
There is a point of issue, some elderly people believe that trip with tour guide is easy and safe, while broad modern youth comments that trip without guide is much cheaper with the use of electronic gadgets. Nowadays with the advancement of technology tour guide system is gradually becoming obsolete. I would disagree with this statement by giving following reasons:
Unfortunately, few greedy guides try to befool visitors by narrating hypothetical stories. For instance, when my family and me went to see famous Taj Mahal in Agra one of the seven wonders, our tour guide added fake story about criminal act by Shahjahan which was not true just to attract tourists and to earn extra money as a tip. This above explanation supports my opinion that one should not depend on guide for travelling to places.
On other hand, fast google search engine enables group of travellers to not only explore mesmerizing places but also to book hotel and other tickets for whole trip. When and my friends went to Smoky mountain Tennessee last week, we booked hotel and even park entry tickets. Most of tourist places have information center and notice board that provides detail about places including precautions. For instance, park staff warned tourist of uneven walking pathway, and incident of beat attack due to damping food trash on walk ways. Considering all these facilities, demand for tour guide is deteriorating.
Affluent people are more likely to hire tour guides as increasing fees are eliminating option for tight budget people. When comparing prices for tour guide versus self designed tour, tour guide outweighs very high in expense. Since, cost of tour guide to travel to the land of heaven Switzerland is outrageous than travelling individually.
Summarizing, disadvantages outweighs the advantages to travel in a group led by a tour guide. It is logical and practical decision to plan a trip without tour guide. On the basis of above explanation, I would prefer travelling and arranging tour by myself rather than paying high sum to tour guide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11538461538 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64669899699 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633136094675 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5933010664 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0625 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18345539404 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637666446747 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362465356232 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104156178046 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358628872471 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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