Some people think that animals should be kept in zoos. While others think the forest are the best for them. Discuss and give your opinion?
Nowadays there is ongoing debate between people about that the claim that animals have "rights" and the zoos are helping or hurting our beloved animals and should the zoos be banned or not? While it is claim that zoos create an easy atmosphere for the animals and provide a basic nutrients to them, my view is that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay I will give my view by supporting those people who think that zoos are helping the animals.
To commence with, there are several ways why the zoos are helping our animals. One of them is that the zoos where an animal live a life in proper way because they have a proper balance deit given by the zoos operator and they have a particular cage or a space for staying. It should also be taken into account that zoos is the place where we can elaborate our skills in study of animal life and the people who visited there have get some or more knowledge after visiting there because in the zoos there are different type of animals. For instance, there is a zoo in New Delhi and they provide a chance to explore a site which have approximately 140 types of animals for viewing or visiting.
Taking these points into consideration from a personal perspective, without a shadow of a doubt, I am inclined to believe that "Zoos" is the place where an animal is treated in a best way to keep them alive as far as they can.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'nutrient'?
Suggestion: nutrient
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'zoos'' or 'zoo's'?
Suggestion: zoos'; zoo's
...have a proper balance deit given by the zoos operator and they have a particular cag...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48638132296 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40746314972 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52140077821 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.636251613 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.125 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.125 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179284876774 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838480766932 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405020826608 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122237458921 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559353867264 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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