You have received a letter from your bank asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card However the card was missing from the envelope Write a letter to the bank s head office In your letter explain why you are writing express concern about the mis

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You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.

Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:

explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do

Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter in connection to a letter received from your bank, asking me to
Send an acknowledgement for the receipt of a new bank card. Unfortunately, the card is
Missing from the envelope.

I asked your bank to issue me a new card, as I misplaced my old card and I am not able
to find it. As I have to travel, abroad, frequently for my company business meetings; I generally use your bank’s card only, as I am using it from last few years and I have this only bank card with me. So, this card is vital for me and I am afraid, if I don’t get the card with next 3-4 days, my next travel may affect due to this.

Keeping my concern at the top, issue me a new card as soon as possible and this time, please make sure the card is included in the envelope.

Thank you kindly in advance,

Yours faithfully,

Pardeep Singh

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, i am afraid

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31927710843 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53037766829 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1718861188 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407378521825 0.216113520407 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205174399397 0.0766984524023 268% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112959530127 0.0603063233224 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216466517843 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920486114827 0.0580467560999 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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