‘Keeping animals in captivity is cruel. There is no reason for zoos to exist in the 21st century’
How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Most people who have seen a lot of animals in a cage have felt that animals are so important to keep them. You know that animals almost endangered in the world. So, the goverment built the zoo in order to keep animals. Zoo is not real habit for animals. People have agree and disagree opinion about zoo and the condition of animals which live in captivity.
Supporters of zoos would argue that there are benefits to keeping animals in captivity. One of most important of these is zoo can make easy life for animals. They will get foods, vitamin, and clean water. Then, people who do not know about the name of strange animal, they go to the zoo. It is same as education. The scientist also doing for research about animal such as their habit and their generation. They often make conservation about breeding programmes for endangered species to produce new generations of animals.
On the other hand, those who oppose zoo would argue that it makes mistake for animals. Zoo makes fauna to do badly because animals feel underpresure for example camel lives in desert, but people take it to live in cage for entertain. Beside that, breeding not always successful because animal does not lives in real habit.
I feel that zoo is very cruel for animal. They are more happy if they can live in real habit. So, that is better if fauna which endangered should live in cage, but animal which is not endangered should live in real habit.
To summary, several people agree about animals in cage, but some people disagree about it. they have different reason to explain the comment.
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You know that animals almost endangered in the world.
You know that animals are always endangered in the world.
People have agree and disagree opinion
People have agreed and disagreed opinions
One of most important of these is zoo can make easy life for animals.
One of most important of these is that zoo can make easy life for animals.
The scientist also doing for research about animal such as their habit and their generation.
The scientist are also doing researches about animals such as their habits and their generations.
breeding not always successful because animal does not lives in real habit.
breeding is not always successful because animal does not lives in real habit.
if fauna which endangered should live in cage, but animal which is not endangered should live in real habit.
if fauna which are endangered should live in cage, but animal which is not endangered should live in real habit.
Sentence: So, the goverment built the zoo in order to keep animals.
Error: goverment Suggestion: government
Sentence: Zoo makes fauna to do badly because animals feel underpresure for example camel lives in desert, but people take it to live in cage for entertain.
Error: underpresure Suggestion: No alternate word
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