Why you come to the pare to learn English?
Pare City is the place to learn English. Many people learn English there. They have different reason to learn English. When i finished my study in senior high school, i browsing on the internet to search the best english course. I found pare is the best english course. I want to learn English beacuse i like English, i want to get scholarship in other country, and i want to get the best score of TOEFL or IELTS.
Firstly, i come to the Pare because i like English. I fell English is very important in our life. I like some people speak English in front of me. I always want to do it. I always want to speak English in excellent fluency. I want to be a people who can speak English. I will continue my study in university and i take a doctor or chemistry major. So, my mother said you must have English skill. Because, if we study in doctor or chemistry major, we will to learn English. But, i learn English in Pare not because my mother or my family. I want to have my will.
Secondly, i wrote in my diary book. I said “i want to get a scholarship in other country”. I always want to study in other country. That is my dream. If we study in other country, we can get a great job in our motherland. Because, we will be appreciated by other people. I want to study in Australia, Korea or Germany. I always give the motivation my self to study hard.
Finally, i could the best score of IELTS or TOEFL too. When we can get a good score of IELTS or TOEFL, we certainly can speak English. If i get a good score of IELTS or TOEFL, i can continue my study everywhere.
In the end, i have some purposes to learn English. I come to Pare because i like English, get a shcolarship, and the best score of IELTS or TOEFL. I am sure if someone want to learn English, they have reason. But, their reason are different from me.
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Sentence: Because, if we study in doctor or chemistry major, we will to learn English.
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Suggestion: Refer to chemistry and major
Sentence: I always give the motivation my self to study hard.
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Sentence: I am sure if someone want to learn English, they have reason.
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Sentence: When i finished my study in senior high school, i browsing on the internet to search the best english course.
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Sentence: I found pare is the best english course.
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Sentence: I want to learn English beacuse i like English, i want to get scholarship in other country, and i want to get the best score of TOEFL or IELTS.
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Sentence: I come to Pare because i like English, get a shcolarship, and the best score of IELTS or TOEFL.
Error: shcolarship Suggestion: scholarship
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