The advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company claims that they should allocate a greater share of it's budget next year to reach the public through advertising as fewer people are watching the movie despite good reviews.
The director should state the exact statistics of the reduction in number of people who attended their movies last year and pervious years. There may be a case that the figures have not reduced with large difference. The impact in reduced number of audience could be due to any reason such as many people were out of town for vacations when the movie was released.
He should state the movie has reviewed by few famous Cinema critics in order to emphasize more on his point. If the movie would have been reviewed by good critics and rated high then it can be considered as a good movie than previous movies.He did not specify that the genre of this movie was same as the movies released earlier for comparison.
The director did not mention how the reviews of the movie are published. In order to allocate more budget for advertising, he should state what are the current methods of advertisement and how they have failed. He should also suggest some new promising methods of advertisement along with survey results showing that the new method of adertisement will definitely result in an increase in the number of viewers.
In my view, the director should focus more on exact count of views reduced and analyzing how the current advertising policy has failed before allocating more budget for advetisement. Advertisement cannot be the only reason for the reduced viewers.
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- not OK
argument 3 -- OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 275 350
No. of Characters: 1327 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.072 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.825 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.48 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.243 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.681 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.149 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be due to any reason such as many people were out of town for vacations when the ...
^^
Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: He
...ed as a good movie than previous movies.He did not specify that the genre of this ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 2260.96107784 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 274.0 441.139720559 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94890510949 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55645406827 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.468620217663 115% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 705.55239521 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4675994109 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.272727273 119.503703932 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.70786347227 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215777235225 0.218282227539 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854536448153 0.0743258471296 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856454549226 0.0701772020484 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125461176632 0.128457276422 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892972232057 0.0628817314937 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.