In the presented letter author argues that reducing quantity of mopeds rented by half will lead to 50% decrease in number of moped accidents. However author’s conclusion might be fallacious as it based on potentially unwarranted assumptions.
To substantiate this claims author needs to provide information on the contribution of rented mopeds in total moped population on island. If the quantity of rented mopeds are very small in comparison to privately owned moped, decreasing the moped rented would not have any significant on accident numbers. Also more information regarding the cause of accidents need to be provided to draw any conclusion. If the cause of accidents are poor road condition or improper traffic management author’s recommendation would be worthless. Also as the motive of the author is to reduce pedestrian-moped accidents it might be more fruitful to improve the pedestrian path which may be a potential reason of accidents.
Moreover author argues that by reducing the number of moped rentals by half the island will achieve 50% reduction in moped accidents. No information is provided to support thee numbers. Author cites the example of nearby island of Seaville which realized the desired result of 50% reduction by implementing similar limits. However it might be possible that moped rental reduction was one of the many steps that Seaville adopted to achieve the target. It is plausible the rental moped reduction had little or no effect on accident numbers. Also it is not scientific to assess to the effect of a policy only from the results of one year. More information on the performance of the policy in a longer time frame is required to ascertain it’s effectiveness. Even if we assume that policy realized results in Seaville it might be possible that it does not work in Balmer. The islands can have very different road network, speed limit laws, traffic management, pedestrian arrangements which can affect the results of the policy.
Conclusively, author does not provide tenable argument to support his recommendation. With each enumerated argument being potentially unwarranted, the conclusion which is based on such an inconclusive argument is not tenable
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26525198939 0.25644967241 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.164456233422 0.15541462614 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114058355438 0.0836205057962 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.053050397878 0.0520304965353 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0238726790451 0.0272364105082 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124668435013 0.125424944231 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0397877984085 0.0416121511921 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02776496025 2.79052419416 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0371352785146 0.026700313972 139% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0928381962865 0.113004496875 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0291777188329 0.0255425247493 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132625994695 0.0127820249294 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2226.0 2731.13054187 82% => OK
No of words: 351.0 446.07635468 79% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.34188034188 6.12365571057 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.57801047555 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424501424501 0.378187486979 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310541310541 0.287650121315 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.233618233618 0.208842608468 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156695156695 0.135150697306 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02776496025 2.79052419416 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 207.018472906 81% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475783475783 0.469332199767 101% => OK
Word variations: 49.1149464871 52.1807786196 94% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.039408867 90% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5 23.2022227129 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5800406947 57.7814097925 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 141.986410481 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.2022227129 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.724660767414 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 3.58251231527 419% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.5541310541 51.9672348444 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.78021978022 1.8405768891 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457701615231 0.441005458295 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131438507304 0.135418324435 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0851871840225 0.0829849096947 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.540764471469 0.58762219726 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139736069442 0.147661913831 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190359993429 0.193483328276 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106421765543 0.0970749176394 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362622686055 0.42659136922 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.159301896783 0.0774707102158 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281241777803 0.312017818177 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139814963273 0.0698173142475 200% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.33743842365 36% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.87684729064 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.82512315271 145% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 5.36822660099 149% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.82389162562 177% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 14.657635468 102% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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