According to the Author, the population at the Balmer Island increase to 100,000 in summer
which revel a fact that crowd on the street of Balmer increase in summer, does the
authories make proper navigation, pedistrian crossing, foot path, sign board and,
manage crowd and traffic flow. In the absence of stated fact, it is not possible
to blame the mopeds drive resposible for the accident. Hence, in absence for proper crowd
management , the crown uses the road for its movement which might cause of accidents
Secondly letter comparing the two neighbour island , seavilla and Balmer, But does
not stated the condition island and managment of authorities. May be the island Seavilla
is small in dimension with small road due to which accident occur.
Third does Seavilla face the same increase in population density in summer?. What are the
reasons for accident in that region. By answer to these question authories
able to conclude exact reason for accidents.
The fourth one does the city authority has proper city connectivity via public transport.
Because the increase in mopeds hiring indicate the lack of transportation in the city due
to which people hiring more mopeds.if connectivity is not proper then, decreasing in mopeds
hiring result in increasing number of person per moped which may be the dangerous situation
mopeds In conclusion, the argument could not convince the readers about the advantages of limiting the number of moped rentals because of several ambiguities and weak points that have. The writer could render strong evidence about the benefits of implementing this strategy and could depict reasonable examples to convince his readers why limiting the number of mopeds rented has a noticeable impact on reducing the percentage of accidents especially in summer months.
- On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the 77
- Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas wher 50
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: According to the Author, the population at the Balmer Island increase to 100,000 in summer which revel a fact that crowd on the street of Balmer increase in summer, does the authories make proper navigation, pedistrian crossing, foot path, sign board and, manage crowd and traffic flow.
Error: authories Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: pedistrian Suggestion: pedestrian
Sentence: In the absence of stated fact, it is not possible to blame the mopeds drive resposible for the accident.
Error: resposible Suggestion: responsible
Sentence: Secondly letter comparing the two neighbour island , seavilla and Balmer, But does not stated the condition island and managment of authorities.
Error: managment Suggestion: management
Error: seavilla Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Words: 288 350
//need introduction and conclusion paragraphs
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 288 350
No. of Characters: 1480 1500
No. of Different Words: 158 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.12 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.139 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.592 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.182 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.896 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.346 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.617 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.053 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of Balmer increase in summer, does the authories make proper navigation, pedist...
^^^
Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sence of stated fact, it is not possible to blame the mopeds drive resposible for...
^^^
Line 6, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in absence for proper crowd management , the crown uses the road for its movemen...
^^
Line 8, column 51, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...etter comparing the two neighbour island , seavilla and Balmer, But does not stat...
^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'state'
Suggestion: state
...nd , seavilla and Balmer, But does not stated the condition island and managment of a...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (May) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...sland and managment of authorities. May be the island Seavilla is small in dimen...
^^
Line 9, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... authorities. May be the island Seavilla is small in dimension with small road du...
^^^
Line 16, column 40, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'?
Suggestion: have
... The fourth one does the city authority has proper city connectivity via public tra...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 28.8173652695 28% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 55.5748502994 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 2260.96107784 68% => OK
No of words: 288.0 441.139720559 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35416666667 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65612163955 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 705.55239521 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.498108094 57.8364921388 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.2 119.503703932 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 23.324526521 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.70786347227 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 5.15768463074 330% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287415238698 0.218282227539 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920341767388 0.0743258471296 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680131745348 0.0701772020484 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826821354347 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850257039914 0.0628817314937 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.3799401198 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.3550499002 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.32208582834 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.9071856287 151% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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