"The citizens of Forsythe have adopted more healthful lifestyles. Their responses to a recent survey show that in their eating habits they conform more closely to government nutritional recommendations than they did ten years ago. Furthermore, there has been a fourfold increase in sales of food products containing kiran, a substance that a scientific study has shown reduces cholesterol. This trend is also evident in reduced sales of sulia, a food that few of the healthiest citizens regularly eat."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author of the argument purportedly highlights that citizens of forsythe have led a healthy lifestyle through nutritional substances that governments offer. However, the premises upon which he puts his claim are fallacious. For the support of which more well-established evidence should be given.
First, the author contends that a recent survey has shown that nutritional program by the government has influenced people positively and they use it more regularly than ten years ago. However, it does not lend credence to the argument since there is no sufficient evidence to support if this survey is accurate and reliable. One point that should be considered is that the author does not show that how many and to the extent people took part in this survey. Indeed, maybe a few people have responded to this study and there is a possibility that they did not tell the truth. What if these people just want to advertise the government's program? It is also important to say that perhaps people in ten years ago were more informed about health problems and did not need to be aware of such kind of program behalf of the government.
The author also asserts that the use of Kiran have increased drastically owing to the fact that based on scientists' study it helps diminish cholesterol. Although it might seem tenable at a face, it has some defects, due to the paucity of evidence that would consolidate the premise the otherwise. One of the main, if not the only, problem with the premise is that there are majorities of problems that prevent people from leading a healthy lifestyle such as fat, sedentary life, fast food and so forth, not just cholesterol. Also, the author does not provide any information that to the extent people suffer from cholesterol. Alongside that, the increased use of Kiran is not a good reason for the lead a healthy life due to the fact that maybe people decline their use of Kiran one day in future. In fact, perhaps people buy this substance for various usages not just eating.
Finally, as set forth by the author many people reduce uses of sulia, which prevent individuals from adopting the healthy lifestyle. Nevertheless, the rationale behind this premise could be challenged owing to an inadequate evidence to support if cut down using this substance is really useful for health. One point that should not go unnoticed is that maybe this product is not tasty or delicious that people prefer not to eat. There is a possibility that this substance has profound impacts on people's health owing to the fact that no one has proved its usefulness yet.
Having scrutinized the premises, a logical conclusion that can be drawn is that there is some evidence, having been ignored by the author while the presence of which could add to the logic of each premise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d of program behalf of the government. The author also asserts that the use of ...
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Line 5, column 788, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ople decline their use of Kiran one day in future. In fact, perhaps people buy this subst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, well, while, in fact, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 13.6137724551 206% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 28.8173652695 156% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2327.0 2260.96107784 103% => OK
No of words: 477.0 441.139720559 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8784067086 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60618961089 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 204.123752495 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482180293501 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 705.55239521 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.471057884232 212% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6386603742 57.8364921388 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.35 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.85 23.324526521 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.88822355289 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155183501756 0.218282227539 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489087764927 0.0743258471296 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677655671411 0.0701772020484 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085195638508 0.128457276422 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784658844328 0.0628817314937 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.3799401198 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 98.500998004 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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