The argument points out that the construction of an additional lane on the Blue Highway will reduce the commuting time between suburbs and city center. This argument is does not account for the over all effects the new lane will bring and does not take into consideration the counter effects of this action.
The major factor this argument does not take into account is that this Blue Highway connects the suburbs to the city center, which would be a popular travel route. There would be many people who would be travelling on this route for various activities and an additional lane cannot limit the increasing number of people travelling on this route. For example a shopkeeper would have to take this highway everyday to commute to his workplace, so would so many other shopkeepers and customers. The argument doesn't take into consideration that when another lane is added, many more establishments would come in the city center, attracting an even higher number of commuters.
Adding another lane might actually end up attracting a larger traffic volume. A lot many people who would otherwise take another route might start taking this highway under the perception that a new lane has been added, which would now reduce the commute time on this highway. At a point when everyone starts with the same assumption, the ultimate result is that the highway produces the same travel time as it did before even after adding another lane.
A large number of people saying a particular action might help, need not necessarily be correct. It is very possible that the suggestion provided by the motorists might not really be effective in real time scenario.
Thus the argument should take into consideration of all the effects of the proposed action and account for all possible scenarios.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 300 350
No. of Characters: 1462 1500
No. of Different Words: 144 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.162 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.873 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.508 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 71 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 44 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.416 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.395 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.676 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.104 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...pkeeper would have to take this highway everyday to commute to his workplace, so would s...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...shopkeepers and customers. The argument doesnt take into consideration that when anoth...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... has been added, which would now reduce the commute time on this highway. At a point when e...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...ore even after adding another lane. A large number of people saying a particular action might...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... be effective in real time scenario. Thus the argument should take into considera...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, really, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 55.5748502994 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 299.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00668896321 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55857433233 2.78398813304 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471571906355 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 705.55239521 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8767671794 57.8364921388 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 119.503703932 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.70786347227 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224134112681 0.218282227539 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968564560533 0.0743258471296 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095304010773 0.0701772020484 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118381480947 0.128457276422 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784631568227 0.0628817314937 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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