During the past year, the channel company has devoted the late night show to national affairs and consequently, Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned without the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have just canceled their advertising with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to the program and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should restore the time devoted to weather and local news to its former level.
less time for weather and local news. In addition to that most of the complaints were regarding the local news coverage and weather. And, many local companies have canceled their late night advertising contract with the channel. Therefore, according to author to restore the previous status of channel, they should give weather and local news more time in late-night show. This might just work but there are many underlying assumptions in the argument, if not resolved then revnues might not boost again.
First assumtion is that channel do have sufficient coverage for weather and local news from which they can provide more content for local and weather news. In addition to that, There is no mention of specific demands from complains, were they quality centric or quantity centric is important to know. If the complains were regarding content of the news then providing more time to weather and local news might just not work. One way to know this is to analyze complains from day time, if they have similar distibution and same complains are coming for weather and local news coverage then there is problem with the quality of news.
Other assumtion author made is regarding advertising contracts. Before coming to conclusion that the reson for canceling the advertising contract is the news, one has to be make sure of it. There might be possibility of other competitors providing same advertisnment at cheaper rate, the changing trends towards internet and digitalization might be affecting the advertising revenue. There might be economical downfall which is preventing local businesses to spend more on publicity.
Furthermore, even if we assume that the less time given for local news and weather is major issue behind this, restoring the time for the local news as of before might not work, as they have alreeady lost their faith. Local businesses might be choosing other channel to advertise their content. So, what is that other competitor offering apart from the services this channel providing, this information is essestial to generate revenue boost.
Suppose, everything is as expected by the author, the decline in revenue from advertising is becasue of less time provision for local news and weather, as well as the majority of the complaints are about the quantity of the local and weather news. Then also we have to analyze our capacity of providing local news content. Apart from that, restoring the news timings is possible but attain the same revenue as of before might not be possible just by increasing timings for endemic news. Restoring credibility takes time, far more then the time it took to loosing it. Thus, there are many assumptions underlying the argument stated, without getting the justification for all, one can not be sure about the consequences or move described.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: This might just work but there are many underlying assumptions in the argument, if not resolved then revnues might not boost again.
Error: revnues Suggestion: revenues
Sentence: First assumtion is that channel do have sufficient coverage for weather and local news from which they can provide more content for local and weather news.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: assumtion Suggestion: assumption
Sentence: In addition to that, There is no mention of specific demands from complains, were they quality centric or quantity centric is important to know.
Error: centric Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: One way to know this is to analyze complains from day time, if they have similar distibution and same complains are coming for weather and local news coverage then there is problem with the quality of news.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: distibution Suggestion: distribution
Sentence: Other assumtion author made is regarding advertising contracts.
Error: assumtion Suggestion: assumption
Sentence: Before coming to conclusion that the reson for canceling the advertising contract is the news, one has to be make sure of it.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: reson Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: There might be possibility of other competitors providing same advertisnment at cheaper rate, the changing trends towards internet and digitalization might be affecting the advertising revenue.
Error: digitalization Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: advertisnment Suggestion: advertisement
Sentence: Furthermore, even if we assume that the less time given for local news and weather is major issue behind this, restoring the time for the local news as of before might not work, as they have alreeady lost their faith.
Error: alreeady Suggestion: already
Sentence: So, what is that other competitor offering apart from the services this channel providing, this information is essestial to generate revenue boost.
Error: essestial Suggestion: essential
Sentence: Suppose, everything is as expected by the author, the decline in revenue from advertising is becasue of less time provision for local news and weather, as well as the majority of the complaints are about the quantity of the local and weather news.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: becasue Suggestion: because
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argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- OK
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flaws:
the conclusion is too long.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 460 350
No. of Characters: 2298 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.631 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.996 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.589 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 149 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 134 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 87 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.905 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.551 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.362 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.545 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Less
less time for weather and local news. In add...
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Line 9, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... also we have to analyze our capacity of providing local news content. Apart from...
^^
Line 9, column 532, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...toring credibility takes time, far more then the time it took to loosing it. Thus, t...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2359.0 2260.96107784 104% => OK
No of words: 460.0 441.139720559 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12826086957 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6232015173 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430434782609 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 705.55239521 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.454539144 57.8364921388 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9047619048 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.70786347227 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272690108907 0.218282227539 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109572954592 0.0743258471296 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946646727917 0.0701772020484 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183565181837 0.128457276422 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923082623245 0.0628817314937 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.3799401198 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.