The editor of a local newspaper sent the following memo to the managing editor of the paper:
“Three years ago when we surveyed our subscribers, they complained about the quality of the reporting and writing in the paper. Since that time, we have made a concerted effort to hire older, more experienced journalists. According to our most recent survey, these changes have made a vast improvement. Not only has our subscriber base grown by 13%, but they also rated us higher on both reporting and writing. Therefore, it is evident that to continue to increase our readership, we should hire the most experienced journalists we can find, and gradually fire our younger, less experienced reporters."
The editor of the local newspaper states that their newspaper states in his memo that their subscriber base grew by 13% after they hired more older and experienced journalists. The editor has come to this conslusion based on the two surveys that we conducted years apart. There could be many other reasons of the increase in the newspaper's subscriber base.
Firstly, let's consider the fact that the surveys were conducted 3 years apart. There could have been many changes that took place in the three years which could have led to the increase in the subscriber base. For example, since they are hiring only older and experienced people only, other newspapers did not have any proper experienced editors who could have published interesting and exiciting new. Which eventually led more people to buy their newspaper.
Secondly, hiring only older and experienced editors means that the younger editors did not have enough job opportunities in their company. So they would have joined a different newspaper company with less number of seniors of the field. So the learning for them will be low. Therefore, the output of the other newspapers would have reduced.
Thirdly, there is no insight given to us about the people, in the three years the population would have increased and also the number of newspaper readers also increased.
Furthermore, hiring only old and experienced people means paying them more money. Even though their subscriber base increased the money they spent also raised. Therefore, higher both older and younger people, could lead to a reduce in money and also lead to a good future because the younger editor would be trained by the experienced editors. This would also benifit their future.
Finally, based on the above examples we can come to a conclusion that hiring of older and experienced people is not the only reason for the increase in the subscribers. Therefore, we can say hiring younger editors does not affect the subscriber rate, but it will eventually increase with the experience they gain.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 335 350
No. of Characters: 1659 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.278 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.952 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.47 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 50 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.611 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.401 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.339 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.596 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'older' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: older
...riber base grew by 13% after they hired more older and experienced journalists. The editor...
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Line 1, column 330, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'newspapers'' or 'newspaper's'?
Suggestion: newspapers'; newspaper's
...ny other reasons of the increase in the newspapers subscriber base. Firstly, lets consi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ublished interesting and exiciting new. Which eventually led more people to buy their...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'editors'' or 'editor's'?
Suggestion: editors'; editor's
...ndly, hiring only older and experienced editors means that the younger editors did not ...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed people means paying them more money. Even though their subscriber base increased the mon...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...older and younger people, could lead to a reduce in money and also lead to a good future...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 16.3942115768 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 335.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10149253731 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53890029395 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 204.123752495 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459701492537 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 705.55239521 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0923837882 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9444444444 119.503703932 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.70786347227 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214629507806 0.218282227539 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728660887901 0.0743258471296 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539890099974 0.0701772020484 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125597116316 0.128457276422 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521986818052 0.0628817314937 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 98.500998004 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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