The following memo appeared form director of student housing at Buckingham college. The Author had made solid conception on the current basis of college. In First glance the author's argument convince at some extent, as current situation of Buckingham college enrollment grows. There are several assumption made by author which are not supported by evidence.
Firstly, Author assumed that from the current trend, there will be definately double enrollment in next fifty years. The assumption has untrue due lack of missing evidence such statistical data or history shows graph of increase in enrollment. Even though currently college have several good achievement due to which having popularity. It may differ in next 50 years. Even though new college may not maintain education facility, student enhancement may lead to reducing in enrollment.
Secondly, The author made assumption that average rent of apartment in town has risen in recent years. so that student will find difficulty to afford off campus housing. Author's strongly assumed that student's find difficulty to afford off campus housing, without knowing there financial condition. If they are ready to stay in apartment with group, then it may by affordable to everyone. at this instant the author's assumption may fail.
Lastly, The author's said that having good dormitories make student more likely to enroll at Buckingham. There are several other reason what student felt at enrolling in to any college. The education facility, study library, Teaching faculty all this thing are matter in enroll procedure. Having only good infrastructure, good dormitories may not lead to growing in enrollment.
To sum up with above conclusion, to growing enrollment Buckingham college they had to need to find out exact requirement of student and apply in practically. by just building dormitories and good infrastructure may not leads for enrollment of students.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 11 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 298 350
No. of Characters: 1585 1500
No. of Different Words: 165 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.155 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.319 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.729 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 126 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.529 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.405 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.581 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.099 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 175, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...t basis of college. In First glance the authors argument convince at some extent, as cu...
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Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
...ham college enrollment grows. There are several assumption made by author which are not supported ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assumptions'?
Suggestion: assumptions
...ege enrollment grows. There are several assumption made by author which are not supported ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... shows graph of increase in enrollment. Even though currently college have several good ach...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ment in town has risen in recent years. so that student will find difficulty to af...
^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “so that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ment in town has risen in recent years. so that student will find difficulty to afford ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t student will find difficulty to afford off campus housing. Authors strongly as...
^^
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to off'
Suggestion: to off
...student will find difficulty to afford off campus housing. Authors strongly assum...
^^^
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y to afford off campus housing. Authors strongly assumed that students find diff...
^^
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to off'
Suggestion: to off
...that students find difficulty to afford off campus housing, without knowing there f...
^^^
Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
... then it may by affordable to everyone. at this instant the authors assumption may...
^^
Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...rdable to everyone. at this instant the authors assumption may fail. Lastly, The aut...
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Line 9, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...nt of student and apply in practically. by just building dormitories and good infr...
^^
Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y not leads for enrollment of students.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 16.3942115768 146% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 298.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46308724832 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8237093573 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55033557047 0.468620217663 117% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 19.7664670659 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.8473053892 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3943656383 57.8364921388 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.4 119.503703932 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9 23.324526521 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.25449101796 266% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311711088609 0.218282227539 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914194531941 0.0743258471296 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112622632261 0.0701772020484 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181147925645 0.128457276422 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950140003144 0.0628817314937 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 48.3550499002 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.1389221557 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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