The following appeared in a memorandum from the manager of KNOW radio station.
"Several factors indicate that KNOW radio can no longer succeed as a rock-and-roll music station. Consider, for example, that the number of people in our listening area over fifty years of age has increased dramatically, while our total number of listeners has declined. Also, music stores in our area report decreased sales of rock-and-roll music. Finally, continuous news stations in neighboring cities have been very successful. We predict that switching KNOW radio from rock-and-roll music to 24-hour news will allow the station to attract older listeners and make KNOW radio more profitable than ever."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
The manager of KNOW radio station has recommended that the station switch from rock-and-roll music to 24-hours news in other to attract older listeners and be more profitable than ever. To bolster these recommendations, the manager cites the following facts: 1. A drastic increase in the number of people of fifty years of age in their listening area. 2. Music stores in their area report decreased sales of rock-and-roll music. 3. Continuous news stations in neighboring cities have been successful. Although, the argument seems sound on the surface, a deeper look would reveal that these arguments fail to answer pertinent questions and in its current state amounts to a poor advice.
First, the manager claims that the number of people over fifty years of age has increased dramatically but fails to substantiate on the significance of the increase with the total number of people that actually make up its audience. It could be that despite this dramatic increase, this age demography still accounts for a less significant amount of their current coverage, thus, the assumption is unwarranted. The manager has to provide data that shows that the percentage of the aforementioned age group is significant enough to justify the recommendation.
Secondly, the manager asserts that reports suggests that music stores in the area has recorded a decrease in sales of rock-and-roll music. This presents a weak analogy in which the manager assumes that both the KNOW station and the stores are similar in all relevant circumstances. The decrease in the number of sales may be as a result of technology. People can now download rock-and-roll music or any other genre from the internet or even subscribes to platforms that provide such services. While for a station, users can tune in to listen to free yet good music genres. This leaves the assumption particularly unwarranted.
Furthermore, the manager cites continuous news stations in neighboring cities and attributes their success only to the services they offer. What demography and clientele do this station serve, what is the population in their listening area. It could be that the clientele in these neighboring cities prefer news while this may not be the case for the neighborhood in which KNOW station currently serve. In which case, switching from their current service to another may eventually mean that they may lose more listeners.
In sum, for KNOW radio station to attract older listeners and make the station more profitable than ever, there should be significant evidence that suggests that the increase in the number of people of age fifty and above in their listening area are actually part of their total number of listeners. Conduct a survey to determine why the decline in the total number of listeners. Also, a convincing empirical data that shows that the listening area of KNOW radio station is the same with the neighboring cities. Failure renders the argument to poor advice.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 481 350
No. of Characters: 2427 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.683 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.046 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.783 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 168 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 132 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 91 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.24 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.247 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.44 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.275 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.275 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 672, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'poor advice'.
Suggestion: poor advice
...ons and in its current state amounts to a poor advice. First, the manager claims that the nu...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... in which the manager assumes that both the KNOW station and the stores are similar in a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 13.6137724551 147% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 28.8173652695 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 55.5748502994 122% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2478.0 2260.96107784 110% => OK
No of words: 481.0 441.139720559 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15176715177 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84847715844 2.78398813304 102% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 204.123752495 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.440748440748 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 705.55239521 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3658975573 57.8364921388 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.739130435 119.503703932 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9130434783 23.324526521 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04347826087 5.70786347227 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353050441389 0.218282227539 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100479469603 0.0743258471296 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834230542666 0.0701772020484 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210877138291 0.128457276422 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878043655877 0.0628817314937 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 98.500998004 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.